Echocardiogram preformed yesterday did reveal an ejection fraction of 29%. It also showed a mildly dilated right ventricle and hypocontractile with a moderate sized paracardal effusion. A small right plural effusion was seen, mild degenerative changes of the aortic and mitral valve, mild mitral regurgitation and sever enlargement of the left atrium, mild tricuspid regurgitation of mild pulmonic insufficiency with sever pulmonary hypertension.
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I believe it sounds right, though I suggest changing this sentence, "A small right plural effusion was seen, mild degenerative changes of the aortic and mitral valve, mild mitral regurgitation and sever enlargement of the left atrium, mild tricuspid regurgitation of mild pulmonic insufficiency with sever pulmonary hypertension," to:
"A small right plural effusion (don't put 'was seen' here, see end of sentence for replacement), mild degenerative changes of the aortic and mitral valve, mild mitral regurgitation and sever enlargement of the left atrium, AND mild tricuspid regurgitation of mild pulmonic insufficiency with sever pulmonary hypertension was seen. (<--replacement)
I hope this helped, but I am only in honors english (as a freshman in hs), and from what I know, this would make a but more sense.
Good luck with what you're doing!
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