Are there any grammar mistakes/errors in this short paragraph?
I believe physician assisted suicide is wrong. It should not be allowed no matter the situation. I believe it is wrong because I think the patient is incapable of making decisions, it violates medical ethics, and most importantly it is murder. The main reason for the patient wanting to allow the doctors to put them to rest is because of the unbearable pain. I feel that death is not the solution to the pain and suffering. Humans should not be in control of when it is time to die, it is not our decision. We are not the creator of our lives therefore it is not up to us to decide.
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I believe physician-assisted suicide is wrong. It should not be allowed no matter the situation. I believe it is wrong because I think the patient is incapable of making decisions, it violates medical ethics, and most importantly it is murder. The main reason for the patient wanting to allow the doctors to put them to rest is because of the unbearable pain. I feel that death is not the solution to the pain and suffering. Humans should not be in control of when it is time to die. It is not our decision. We are not the creator of our lives; therefore it is not up to us to decide.
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I believe physician-assisted suicide is wrong. It should not be allowed no matter the situation. I believe it is wrong because I think the patient is incapable of making decisions; it violates medical ethics, and most importantly, it is murder. The main reason for the patient wanting to allow the doctors to put them to rest is because of the unbearable pain. I feel that death is not the solution to the pain and suffering. Humans should not be in control of when it is time to die; it is not our decision. We are not the creator of our lives; therefore, it is not up to us to decide.
You had a lot of run-ons in this paragraph. I fixed them with semi-colons, and also added some commas where necessary. I hope this helps!
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